Dialogue - Blog Posts

Apparently a lot of people get dialogue punctuation wrong despite having an otherwise solid grasp of grammar, possibly because they’re used to writing essays rather than prose. I don’t wanna be the asshole who complains about writing errors and then doesn’t offer to help, so here are the basics summarized as simply as I could manage on my phone (“dialogue tag” just refers to phrases like “he said,” “she whispered,” “they asked”):

“For most dialogue, use a comma after the sentence and don’t capitalize the next word after the quotation mark,” she said.

“But what if you’re using a question mark rather than a period?” they asked.

“When using a dialogue tag, you never capitalize the word after the quotation mark unless it’s a proper noun!” she snapped.

“When breaking up a single sentence with a dialogue tag,” she said, “use commas.”

“This is a single sentence,” she said. “Now, this is a second stand-alone sentence, so there’s no comma after ‘she said.’”

“There’s no dialogue tag after this sentence, so end it with a period rather than a comma.” She frowned, suddenly concerned that the entire post was as unasked for as it was sanctimonious.

words for when your characters ______

Agree

accede, acceptance, accord, acknowledgment, acquiescence, align, avowal, bear, cohere, compromise, consent, contract, draft, enlist, give in/give up, go along/go along with, grant, negotiate, unanimous, yield

Deny

abjure, abuse, affront, attack, backstab, bad-mouth, belie, blacken, blemish, confront, curse, darn, defamation, defile, demur, denigrate, detract, dig, disclaim, discountenance, disgrace, disown, disparagement, downplay, explode, flout, fulminate, gainsay, gird, invective, jeer, lament, lecture, malign, minimize, mouth, needle, oppose, protest, put down, put-down, rebuff, refute, remonstrate, renunciation, run down, satirize, scold, show up, sit-in, slander, smear, snap, snub, squeal, sully, swearing, taunt, tirade, turn, underestimate, vituperation, write off, yammer

Explain

account for, admit, apprise, cite, clarify, come clean, concede, confirm, corroborate, defense, demonstrate, dilate, elucidate, enlighten, evidence, expand, explicate, gloss, illustrate, itemize, let on, palliate, plea, prove, recite, simplify, speak out/speak up, spell out, translator, warrant

Fabricate

aspersion, belie, disprove, profane

Inform

acknowledge, address, advertise, allow, allusion, apprise, bare, betrayal, blab, breathe, briefing, broadcast, chronicle, clue, come out with, confession, convey, debunk, define, detail, dictate, divulge, expose, feature, furnish, give, gossip, hint, intimate, issue, lecture, newscaster, orate, out of the closet, pass, post, proclaim, promulgate, publication, publish, release, reveal, show up, speak, spill, squeal, talk, tip, uncover, unveil, weatherperson, whisper

Instruct

bar, educate, prescribe

Persuade

advance, argument, bend, budge, carry, coerce, convince, discourage, draw, drum up, elicit, entice, forward, goad, hammer away/hammer into, induce, influence, invite, lobby, motivate, negotiation, pitch, prevail upon/prevail on, prompt, reason, spur, sway, urge, win/win over

Promise

assurance, avow, commitment, ensure, go back/go back on, oath, portend, vouch, warrant, word

Suggest

advice, advocate, ask, come up with, connote, drum into, exhort, fish for, get at, guide, imply, insinuate, moralize, move, nomination, pontificate, preach, propose, recommend, urge

Praise

accent, acclamation, accredit, adulation, apotheosis, applause, benediction, bless, champion, citation, commend, compliment, congratulations, credit, dedicate, deify, elevate, endorse, eulogize, exalt, extol, flatter, flattery, glorify, homage, laud, lionize, obsequy, plaudits, puff, salute, thanks, tribute, worship

Warn

admonish, alert, caution, caveat, defy, enjoin, exhortation, foreboding, foretell, page, remind, warning

NOTE

The above are concepts classified according to subject and usage. It not only helps writers and thinkers to organize their ideas but leads them from those very ideas to the words that can best express them.

It was, in part, created to turn an idea into a specific word. By linking together the main entries that share similar concepts, the index makes possible creative semantic connections between words in our language, stimulating thought and broadening vocabulary.

Source ⚜ Writing Basics & Refreshers ⚜ On Vocabulary

Wow. The patience, kindness and calm communication skills. Outstanding.

From raindovemodel

For later

Words to use instead of ‘said’

**Using the word ‘said’ is absolutely not a bad choice, and in fact, you will want to use it for at least 40% of all your dialogue tags. Using other words can be great, especially for description and showing emotion, but used in excess can take away or distract from the story.

Neutral: acknowledged, added, affirmed, agreed, announced, answered, appealed, articulated, attested, began, bemused, boasted, called, chimed in, claimed, clarified, commented, conceded, confided, confirmed, contended, continued, corrected, decided, declared, deflected, demurred, disclosed, disputed, emphasized, explained, expressed, finished, gloated, greeted, hinted, imitated, imparted, implied, informed, interjected, insinuated, insisted, instructed, lectured, maintained, mouthed, mused, noted, observed, offered, put forth, reassured, recited, remarked, repeated, requested, replied, revealed, shared, spoke up, stated, suggested, uttered, voiced, volunteered, vowed, went on

Persuasive: advised, appealed, asserted, assured, begged, cajoled, claimed, convinced, directed, encouraged, implored, insisted, pleaded, pressed, probed, prodded, prompted, stressed, suggested, urged

Continuously: babbled, chattered, jabbered, rambled, rattled on

Quietly: admitted, breathed, confessed, croaked, crooned, grumbled, hissed, mumbled, murmured, muttered, purred, sighed, whispered

Loudly: bellowed, blurted, boomed, cried, hollered, howled, piped, roared, screamed, screeched, shouted, shrieked, squawked, thundered, wailed, yelled, yelped

Happily/Lovingly: admired, beamed, cackled, cheered, chirped, comforted, consoled, cooed, empathized, flirted, gushed, hummed, invited, praised, proclaimed, professed, reassured, soothed, squealed, whooped

Humour: bantered, chuckled, giggled, guffawed, jested, joked, joshed

Sad: bawled, begged, bemoaned, blubbered, grieved, lamented, mewled, mourned, pleaded, sniffled, sniveled, sobbed, wailed, wept, whimpered

Frustrated: argued, bickered, chastised, complained, exasperated, groaned, huffed, protested, whinged

Anger: accused, bristled, criticized, condemned, cursed, demanded, denounced, erupted, fumed, growled, lied, nagged, ordered, provoked, raged, ranted remonstrated, retorted, scoffed, scolded, scowled, seethed, shot, snapped, snarled, sneered, spat, stormed, swore, taunted, threatened, warned

Disgust: cringed, gagged, groused, griped, grunted, mocked, rasped, sniffed, snorted

Fear: cautioned, faltered, fretted, gasped, quaked, quavered, shuddered, stammered, stuttered, trembled, warned, whimpered, whined

Excited: beamed, cheered, cried out, crowed, exclaimed, gushed, rejoiced, sang, trumpeted

Surprised: blurted, exclaimed, gasped, marveled, sputtered, yelped

Provoked: bragged, dared, gibed, goaded, insulted, jeered, lied, mimicked, nagged, pestered, provoked, quipped, ribbed, ridiculed, sassed, teased

Uncertainty/Questionned: asked, challenged, coaxed, concluded, countered, debated, doubted, entreated, guessed, hesitated, hinted, implored, inquired, objected, persuaded, petitioned, pleaded, pondered, pressed, probed, proposed, queried, questioned, quizzed, reasoned, reiterated, reported, requested, speculated, supposed, surmised, testified, theorized, verified, wondered

This is by no means a full list, but should be more than enough to get you started!

Any more words you favor? Add them in the comments!

Happy Writing :)

When I started writing fanfiction like ten years ago, dialogue was absolutely my weakest point. And I knew it. Character voice was a struggle, I used more ellipses than words probably, I just tried to lean on narration instead.

Fun to reflect and realize what a 180 I did on that. Cuz frankly dialogue is a DELIGHT and the best part of writing now. I love strong character voices. I love making characters trip over their words and talk over each other and go on tangents and lose their point and snark and snap at each other and crack wise and just, I love thinking about how dialogue sounds, and what feels most organic. 

Description and narration are all still well and good, but it’s like those are the framework and scaffolding to set characters up to just say shit. I LOVE making characters just say shit. The truest delight of fanfic.

Can you hear your characters?

I have a whole lot of trouble making my dialogue sound natural if I don’t know what my characters sound like. Having a strong sense of their voice can help distinguish your characters from each other, show their personalities, and make them more engaging to readers. 

Here’s some details to think over if you’re trying to nail down a character’s voice:

Speed

Pitch

Volume

Accent

Vocabulary

Amount spoken

Willingness to speak

Stutters

Hesitations

Repetitions

Quirks 

Common phrases 

Other questions to ask:

Do their voices or the way they talk change depending on who they’re talking to or the situation they’re in? 

How can their personality come through their voice? Their sarcasm, empathy, awkwardness, etc. 

What in their backstory contributes to the way they talk? 

When they make a statement, how often does it come off as unsure or questioning, versus confident and factual? 

How does their voice relate or coexist with their body language? 

How to use Loki dialogue in everyday life:

Dad: Have you seen my phone?

You: I sent it off, I know not where.

Sister: Will you wash the dishes?

Me: No. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to destroy Jotunheim.

Friend: You're so crazy.

Me: Is it madness? IS IT?

Friend: I would tell you this secret, but I promised not to--

Me: TELL MEEEEE!!!

Sister: Is Dad awake yet?

Me: Father has fallen into the Odin sleep. Mother fears he may never awaken again.

Sister: Hey, remember that time when we were kids and--

Me: I remember a shadow. Living in the shade of your greatness.

Mom: Stop changing channels--

Me: It's too late to stop it. The Bifrost will build until Jotunheim is ripped apart.

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WTF?

This is so fucking brilliant! In a hilarious way! XD

incorrect quote template

character1: when you said “fuck the patriarchy” did you mean that metaphorically or literally?

character2: . . . metaphorically

character1: gotchaaaa, i wasn’t sure so i did both just to be safe—

Random Whump Dialogue Prompts

Content: Begging, Possessive whumper, [implied] non-con, [implied] pet whump, [implied] slavery.

"When they're yelling at you, you're okay. It's when they go quiet that you should be scared."

"I think you need a little something to remind you of who you belong to."

"Can you two manage not to tear each other apart while I'm gone?"

"--but why should I let you go when you look so pretty like this?"

"Make yourself useful. Do something- anything, but annoy me."

"Keep crying; your face looks beautiful streaked with tears."

"How else am I supposed to learn if you don't punish me?"

"I don't care how much you hate me - you need to eat!"

"We don't go near that one unless we have to feed it."

"How many times do I have to explain this to you?"

"I don't care about how gross it makes you feel."

"It's just a knife - why do you look so scared?"

"As long as you're good, Master will be kind."

"That is a privilege you have not earned yet."

"You're enjoying this, aren't you? Freak."

"Do you wanna lose the other one, too?"

"What do you mean, they cursed you?"

"What is this 'mercy' you speak of?"

"You're a feisty one, aren't you?"

"Please, just make this quick."

"If I have to force you, I will."

"Please don't give me away!"

"I won't say it again."

"This is your home."

"Are you new here?"

"You wouldn't."

60 Whump Dialogue

Content: Torture, dehumanisation, pet whump, [implied] whumper-turned-whumpee, [implied] whumpee-turned-whumper, [implied] caretaker-turned-whumpee, sacrifice, death wish, [mentioned] death, [implied] non-con, bad caretaker.

Whumper

"You are nothing but a toy. A toy to play with and mould and break as I please."

"Go ahead. Cry and scream. It only makes this all the more fun."

"Maybe if you're good, I'll only shatter one of your ankles. Hm?"

"Look at the screen. Fucking look at it. I want you to witness this."

"You wouldn't risk your life for anyone? Perhaps we need to put this to the test."

"What makes you think I'll let you go so easily?"

"How dare you speak to me like that?"

"Have your fun while you can because I'm going to kill you the moment I get out of these."

"I'm going to find what breaks you, Whumpee. That I can promise."

"My life was so much easier before I took you. I regret it with every fibre of my fucking being."

"I wonder how loud you'd scream if I just..."

"Smile for the camera!"

"A good little pet cleans Its master's shoes with Its tongue, I'll have you know."

"I am not someone you want to mess with, Whumpee. Do as I say."

"Look who decided to crawl their way back into their master's arms. I told you you'd be back."

"I think you'd like adorable with some piercings, don't you agree?"

"Stay still."

"Maybe I'll keep you as my personal canvas from now on."

"Have fun hanging there!"

"I purchased some stuff for you. After all, every good pet deserves some enrichment."

Whumpee

"I just wanna go home."

"You can't leave me here! Please!"

"I never lost hope. I always knew- I... I knew you'd come for me eventually."

"You'd think after so long of having me here, you'd get better at tying me up."

"Please don't leave me down here again. I'll take whatever you wanna do to me, just- just let me come with you."

"You thought I wouldn't be back? I'm not finished with you yet. Not until you pay for what you did."

"You- you promised!"

"Not again..."

"You thought I was here to rescue you? That's the funniest thing I've heard all week."

"Am I gonna die?"

"Ju-ust kill me already!"

"I'm not moaning! It fucking hurts!"

"When Caretaker finds you, they'll- they'll kill you. I promise you that."

"What happened? Holding someone captive not as fun as you thought it'd be?"

"P-please... please, no more."

"You can do what you want to me, but I'm sure as hell not making this easier for you."

"Sometimes I imagined it was you, to- to help me get through it."

"Where am I?"

"Please, the restraints hurt. Can't you use something softer or- or at the very least loosen it?"

"Look at what they did to me! Look at the person I've become!"

Caretaker

"I never stopped searching for you."

"Let's go home, okay?"

"Yes, you're a burden, but you're one that I've chosen to carry."

"Where the hell are they?"

"Let me go! I need to find them!"

"May I touch you?"

"Breathe, Whumpee, please breathe."

"If I ever see you sniffing around here again, I'll make you regret it."

"I'm not going to punish you."

"I'm trying to help you, but that won't happen if you continue to treat me like this."

"Are you serious? You're just going to let them back into your life after what they did to you?"

"You sacrificed me so you wouldn't have to go back! How could you do that to me?"

"Please put the knife down, Whumpee."

"Why do I like seeing them cry? What is wrong with me?"

"I can't promise that I won't ever hurt you, but I can promise that It's never deliberate."

"Would you like me to make you some food?"

"Perhaps someone does need to punish you for you to understand. Nothing else seems to work."

"I hired someone to come and install a dimmable light in your bedroom so you don't have to sleep in the dark."

"You know what? I'd go through it all again if it meant you were safe."

"Whumper was right. They are a pathetic little thing. I think that's why they're so endearing."

Whump Prompts: Lines that work for Whumper AND Caretaker

Exactly what the title says. Sometimes there are lines that feel like they could work both in a whumpy context, and in a caring, loving context. This list is that intersection.

This is a collaboration with our darling @painsandconfusion, who's finally convinced me to play an active role in the community, so here you all go:

"Drink this."

"Don't move."

"I won't lie to you, this is going to hurt."

"Does that feel better?"

"Do you like that?"

"Oh honey, you're trembling."

"Shh....don't talk."

"You can cry, it's okay."

"What you need is a nice, long rest."

"Hold still and this will hurt less."

"Let me see."

"Don't think about that right now."

"They're not here."

"Are you going to tell me where you got that?"

"I'm gonna lock the door now."

"I'm right here."

"There's no shame in asking for help."

"Does that hurt?"

"Shh...I know it hurts."

"This should warm you up."

"I don't mind the blood"

"You aren't squeamish are you?"

"Do you want me to come over there?"

"Wait right here."

"Is that too hot?"

"We're gonna take it nice and slow, alright?"

"I think that's enough for today."

"Take a deep breath."

"Look at me - hey, look at me."

"How about I kiss it better?"

"Take it easy, you aren't going anywhere for a while."

"Oh, is that too tight?"

"I'm just trying to help."

"Trust me, you don't want to do that."

"You can never go wrong with a nice, hot cup of tea."

"Here, this will help you sleep."

"Now close your eyes."

Feel free to use these, and please tag myself and/or @painsandconfusion so we can read your wonderful whumpy writing!

And as always, if you think anything else needs to be tagged, just let me know :)

Mix n Match Whump Prompts!

Grab one (or more) from each category and see what you can make! Let that imagination run wild!

(If you write one, please tag me so I can see! If you want me to write one, just send an ask with your combination of choice. Have fun!)

Quotes:

1. Thought you could avoid me?

2. I’ll be good. I’ll be so good. Please.

3. Did you think I wouldn’t notice?

4. Get off them!

5. Don’t black out on me, I’m not even close to being done with you.

6. Don’t. Move.

7. Fuck you, psycho. I’m not doing that.

8. I’m giving you ten seconds to fix that attitude.

9. Don’t squirm. No no, hold still. Hold very still.

10. Pull away from me again and you’re going to fucking regret it.

11. Make me, bitch.

12. You really thought they cared about you? Honey, I’m all you’ve got.

13. No! Don’t touch them!

14. Knees. Now.

15. Scream for me.

16. Quiet. Veeeeery quiet. That’s better. You know what will happen to you if someone hears.

17. I don’t think you understand the situation you’re in.

18. Let me just spread the blood across your lips…There. Lovely. Red really is your color.

19. Ask me nicely.

20. Let me go. Please. Please, I don’t tell anyone, just let me go!

Locations:

1. A basement

2. The woods

3. Police Station

4. Whumpee’s bedroom

5. The backyard

6. A dungeon cell

7. Train station

8. Whumper’s bedroom

9. Kitchen

10. On a plane

11. On a sidewalk

12. Inside a car

13. Outside a car

14. An office

15. A dark stairwell

16. Abandoned alleyway

17. Coffee shop back room

18. Living room

19. Cabin in the woods

20. Hotel room

Items:

1. Chains

2. Box cutter

3. Rope

4. Broken glass

5. Hammer

6. Pliers

7. Needle

8. Tweezers

9. Blindfold

10. Alcohol

11. Scalpel

12. Lighter

13. Muzzle

14. Cane

15. Gag

16. Whip

17. Pillow

18. Branding iron

19. Duct tape

20. White-hot metal

Kidnapping Prompts

Just some basic kidnapping starters for you...

"I'm going to put this on you, and you're not going to fight me. Got it?"

Whumpee trying to be as quiet as possible dialing 911, only to find there's no connection.

"Sorry, I'm not convinced you'll stay quiet about this."

"This is going to sting a little."

Whumpee sprinting for the door, barely prying it open before being jerked back inside.

"Shh...Don't scream. Hold very still."

Whumpee waking up in an unfamiliar place.

"No no, don't touch the blindfold. You won't like what happens next if you do."

Whumpee struggling, clawing, screaming uselessly into the chloroform rag. Their thrashing gradually slows to a stop as they fall limp in Whumper's arms.

"You're so cute, I think I might just keep you."

Whumpee pounding at the lid of a trunk, desperate for anyone to notice they're there. Slowly giving in to curling up in a ball and crying.

"You don't have to do this." "Oh, I know. I get to do this."

"Shh...stay quiet for me and I won't have to hurt anyone else tonight."

Whumpee waking up to a hand clamped over their mouth, thrashing in the darkness. Disoriented. Unable to fight what they can't see.

"Are you going to get in the car or do I have to put you in the car?"

“Found you.”

Whumper waiting very patiently under Whumpee's bed for them to fall asleep.

"Listen very carefully and I won't have to hurt you. Okay?"

Whumpee barely getting inside the door when something smashes into the back of their head. They spiral to the floor, bursts of light blurring the world into darkness.

"Stop. - Stop fighting me."

The sinking realization twisting into panic as Whumpee hears the lock click.

"Careful. I don't want to get blood on your nice floors."

Whumpee twitching away from the knife pressed to their throat, too terrified to try to see who is holding it.

"Hmm, is the knife cold against your throat? Try not to flinch, I wouldn't want to slip."

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(tags: @prisonerwhump @whumpawink @mabledonut @paleassprince @distinctlywhumpthing @tropes-for-my-md-daydreams @batfacedliar-yetagain @suspicious-whumping-egg @lav-whumps )

Hey! Could you please do a promptlist for interrogation tactics please

Yes!!

A torture interrogation tactics list sounds like such a good idea! I’d love to write some torture interrogation things for you. There’s so many different methods and categories to explore when torturing interrogating, so this might go a little long 😅

There's both physical and psychological tactics (of course there's some crossover, but ya know).

(tw: so much....idk how to even tw for this because....well...that would just be re-writing the list. But there's eaten-alive animal whump and some light fingore which hits the big common squiks. lots of basic torture and pain)

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Physical Techniques

Long Game

Drip torture. Tie them down with something rigged up above them so water will drip on their face every few seconds. Make it so they cant move - so each drop hits the same place every time. At first, it's no big deal. After a few hours, they start to lose their minds. They go numb yet it's excruciating. Their body doesn't know how to process the sensation anymore and they start begging. It's so easy and so lovely.

Thousand-cut torture. Just make hundreds of tiiiiiiiiny little cuts. Paper-cuts, really. Each one stings and burns, but nothing major. But hundreds? Thousands? It becomes too much so so so so fast. They go numb, then hypersensitive. Each one compounding on the others.

STRESS POSITIONS. Sorry this is a favorite. I get excited. Tie them in a way that strains them. Their muscles. Their joints. Don't let them sleep. There's only the constant ache and unnatural twisting of their bones. Or...ropes around their neck. Don't fall asleep, Whumpee. You won't wake back up....

Cold. Keep them in a cold room. Let them shiver and watch their fingers turn blue. Constant aching, never sure when they can get out.

Alternately, heat. Let them go delirious from dehydration, checking in only so see if they're ready to talk.

Thousands of tiiiiiny stabs. Similar to the thousand-cut torture, but just poke poke poke with a needle. Over and over again. They'll go hypersensitive. Then numb. Then it's back again. See witch tests for more.

There's a lovely cowboy torture where you soak a leather whip or lariat in water (let it get nice and soft and stretched out), then tie it around the victim's throat. String them up so they're standing comfortably in their noose. The sun beats down on them. The leather dries. The rope shrinks. Slow-motion strangulation. All the time in the world to think about the sensation of dying. All the time in the world to change their mind about being uncooperative.

Pain

Do I really need to get too much into this?? We have.....

Ripping off fingernails.

Breaking bones.

Cutting/stabbing.

Dislocating joints. Bonus points if you keep popping it back into socket, then grinding it out again. Over and over. Lots of screaming with that one.

Burning.

Pressure Points.

Whipping.

Electrocution.

Etc etc etc. Y'all know how to whump, I have faith in you lol.

Air

People get desperate so fast when they cant breath. We have....

Drowning.

Water-boarding.

Strangulation.

Plastic bags over the head.

Just covering their mouth and nose.

Keeping them in a small, sealed room - let them slowly panic as the oxygen runs out.

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Psychological

Isolation. Lock them in a room for months on end. Irregular meals. No access to clocks or windows. Just constant droning silence and grey walls. Let them go mad

The REID method. Honestly not torture - genuine interrogation. It's no longer allowed for use in police stations because it messes with the subject's head so much they often confess to things they didn't do - even to the point of believing they did. It includes things like crowding and intimidating the subject, and talking over them to prevent them for verbalizing anything you don't want them to say (eg: denial).

Hints. Just clues. Let them drives themselves mad trying to figure out what you're going to do next. For example, walk in with a rat, a bucket, and an iron. Take a phone call and walk out with a 'I gotta handle this, I'll be back in a bit'. Just let their imaginations run wild.

More blackmailing than true interrogation, but just show Whumpee a list of names and addresses. Let them see that it's not just their life on the line - there's plenty of unsuspecting loved ones out there who would have no idea what hit them.

PHOBIAS. Okay I have a thing for phobias, don't come for me. But it takes so little effort if you have their weak spot. Is it spiders? Snakes? Darkness? Small Spaces? Find it. Use it. Watch them break.

This is half physical, but....Bleeding out. Make a cut. Watch it drip. Every drop brings them closer to death. Give them a nice long time to think on that.

The good-old-fashioned 'make them watch'. Let Whumpee see you torturing a loved one or a friend instead. See how long they can stand hearing the screams.

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Animals

Okay this might get a little squikky, but there's lots of animals that can be of assistance.

Rats. Leave whumpee bound and defenseless, preferably bleeding, and rats will have no qualms nibbling away at them. (bonus points to anyone who knows / can guess the rat and bucket thing I mentioned earlier).

Wild animals (particularly wolves, coyotes, wild dogs). Same concept. Leave them smelling delicious and defenseless and let them wait there, knowing the animals will gladly tear them apart when Whumper leaves.

Bugs. Especially spiders, most people do not like. They especially wouldn't like...say...being stuck in a box full of them. Unable to even open their mouth without getting some inside. Fire ants would also be great.

Pigs. Probably not a good long-game, but they'll eat you alive. They're vicious. Unlike the others, they truly don't care if you fight back. They'll tear your Whumpee to shreds and take care of most of the evidence for you. For a whumpee who knows what pigs can do, the thought of being forced in that pen is terrifying.

Just imagine if the Whumper had a box of bullet ants. Most painful sting on earth (supposedly), and it won't kill you. Not even a little. Every wrong answer gets you another sting.

I...uh...know another cowboy torture from old movies that I'm not gonna elaborate on, but it involves a hungry baby calf and only works on half the population. Just...I'll just...leave you to figure that one out.

Maggots. Maggots are actually pretty good for open wounds - they eat out the dead cells but leave the living. Still, imagine how horrifying it would be to be bound and have to watch maggots eat away your flesh. And the smell.

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Dialogue Prompts

Here, have some dialogue prompts just for the heck of it - I loved this request, so my mind is roaming. Enjoy XD

Are your lips feeling any looser now?

Are you sure you can take more?

Beg all you want, it won't help. You know what you have to do to make it stop.

Crying already? Cute.

How are you feeling?

Sure. Of course I'll take it off. As soon as you tell me where they are.

I'm going to ask again...

Mmm nope. Not the answer I was looking for. Try again.

You can't break already. I've hardly touched you.

Would you like to reconsider my offer?

Let's try this again. Where are they?

No? Alright, back in you go.

Aww, tired already? I'm not. I could go all night.

Last chance.

'Kill' you? Now why would I want to do that? We are having so much fun together.

You make so many noises. Too bad none of them are useful.

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(tags: @prisonerwhump @whumpawink @mabledonut @jadeocean46910 @paleassprince @distinctlywhumpthing @tropes-for-my-md-daydreams @batfacedliar-yetagain @suspicious-whumping-egg @lav-whumps @wormwriting)

Whump Prompts: Found You

I just saw a fantastic post by @whumpingcrow and it got me thinking about when an *almost* recovered, escaped whumpee is found by whumper again. So here's a list of ways for Whumper to say 'found you'.

Whumpee walks into their home, takes off their shoes, hangs up the keys, and goes to flop on the couch. But they see someone is already there. Whumper gives them a big smile, “I was wondering when you’d be back. Let’s go, I already packed up your things.”

Whumpee getting a text from an unknown number: “Tag! You’re it.”

Whumpee picking up their office phone at work and freezing when they hear Whumper’s voice. “Ah, there’s that lovely voice. No, don’t you dare hang up on me. We have some things to discuss.”

Whumpee working tech support and getting randomly connected to Whumper. Freezing up as they recognize their voice, trying to change their own. Not knowing if Whumper knows it’s them and trying to find a way to end the conversation as quickly as possible. Then they hear, “You know, I don’t think I’m going to be able to get this on my own. Maybe I should give you my address and you can come help me. Better yet, give me yours and I’ll come get you.”

Whumper getting a letter and opening it at the mailbox. “I didn’t think I’d find you in a real house, especially not one with such a well-stocked fridge. Congratulations. Really, you’ve outdone yourself. I’m so proud.”

A note on their desk at work in all too-familiar handwriting: “See you soon! <3”

Whumpee coming home to find a bouquet of their favorite flowers on their table. Flowers only Whumper ever got for them.

Getting random text that says, “I can’t say I like the new name. It doesn’t suit you. However, I AM a huge fan of your outfit today. You know red’s my favorite color on you.”

Whumpee having coffee alone at a busy cafe when Whumper slides into the seat across from them. “It’s been so long! You’re looking great.” Whumpee can’t manage to do anything but stare as they hands start shaking.

An exhausted Whumpee driving home from work. They flinch and swerve as they feel a knife at their throat. “Take a deeeeep breath. Just keep driving and do what I say, and you’ll be fine.”

Whumpee just walking down the sidewalk as an arm tugs around their waist. They look up to see Whumper pressed close. They try to stop walking, but Whumper tugs at their hip and they are too afraid to pull away. “Don’t fight me. Just keep walking and this will turn out much better for you.”

Whumpee waking up in the middle of the night to Whumper standing over them. This still happens several times a week, but it’s always just a dream. They take a deep breath, blink hard, and flip on their lamp, trying to make the image fade, but it’s real this time. “You look surprised to see me. Didn’t I tell you I’d always find you? Now get dressed. We’re leaving.”

Whumpee answers to door and freezes when they see Whumper’s smile. “I was in the neighborhood and thought I’d stop by. Aren’t you going to invite me in?”

Whumpee sees Whumper leaning against their car when they get to it in the parking garage. “Shhh shhh. Don’t talk. Don’t move. Don’t scream. I’m already very angry with you. You don’t want to make it worse, do you?” Whumpee just shakes their head in small jerky motions.

Whumpee taking out the trash to the dumpster in the alley after work. Whumper appearing out of nowhere and backing them into a corner. “You can walk to my car and get in the trunk, or I’ll use this and carry you. Your choice.”

Whump Prompts: Degradation Starters

Let's get some good, old fashioned degradation lines!

This list is a collaboration with @wormwriting! Aren't they just wonderful??

Just look at you. Trembling. Panting. It's gorgeous.

Aww, why are you flinching? Are you scared?

Hmm? What was that? Speak up, darling.

You scream when I tell you to scream.

Ask nicely.

They "loved you"? Really. You? Did you really believe that? I mean, just look at you.

You think they're coming back for you? Cute.

Look at you. Pathetic.

You're almost pretty when you're crying. It's quite an improvement. I bet you'd be gorgeous screaming, though.

Stay STILL! Now there's a good love. I was worried you couldn't manage even such a simple task.

Oh, just look at that. You were just made to kneel, weren't you?

Threats don't have quite the same 'zing' when your voice is trembling so much.

Aw, can't walk? Don't worry. I'll carry you.

Oh come on, you can do better than that.

I'm sorry, you "think" that's a bad idea? Honey I don't need you to "think".

Oh you're sooooo flinchy today. It's like you've never seen a knife before.

Ah ah ah- I didn't ask you to speak.

I'm sorry, I really can't help it. You're just so adorable.

You're "sorry"? Maybe if you weren't so useless, you'd spend less time begging for forgiveness.

You never appreciated air this much, did you? Now say thank you.

You keep asking me to stop. Has that ever worked for you before?

There's no shame in asking for help.

Do you think you can feed yourself this time? Or am I gonna have to take charge again?

You used to have so much fight in you. Now look what you've become.

It's almost like you want to be nothing more than my pretty little thing.

No? But you're so cute when you're begging.

How could you save anyone? You can't even save yourself.

Don't look so frustrated. You never stood a chance.

Caretaker is lying in an unmarked grave because of you, and here you are feeling sorry for yourself.

I can't believe I payed money for you. They should have paid me.

Careful, darling. You're starting to become more trouble than you're worth.

Better put that down. You could hurt yourself.

Aww, is someone feeling dizzy?

Oh, I'm sorry, was that sentence too complex? I'll be sure to use small words from now on.

Don't give me that look, this is your own fault.

I know I didn't just hear you say "stop". I taught you better than that.

Okay, I'm gonna put the knife down now, and you're gonna stay quiet. You think you can manage that?

Don't hold back. I want to hear all your cute little noises.

You look so perfect on your knees.

That's it, get comfortable. You're not going anywhere.

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As always, please tag me and/or @wormwriting if you use any of these prompts, we want to see the whumpy scenes that come from this ;)

(tags: @prisonerwhump @whumpawink @mabledonut @paleassprince @distinctlywhumpthing@tropes-for-my-md-daydreams @batfacedliar-yetagain @suspicious-whumping-egg )

Defiant Whumpees

Collab with @wormwriting!

Lines:

“Mm, yeah. Gaslight me harder.”

“Oh, you want me to call you sir, sir? Of course, sir. Anything you say, sir. Anything else, sir?”

“If you want to know how I’m doing, come a little closer and find out for yourself.”

“Kiss your own boots if you want it that bad.”

"You know, Einstein said that the definition of insanity was doing the same thing over and over again and expecting different results. And you seem like a smart person. Really, you do. But you keep asking me the same fucking question and I keep giving you the same fucking answer and now I'm starting to think maybe you aren't as smart as you look."

“You always want me on my knees. I should just get you a step stool or something for Christmas.”

“Make me.”

“Fun fact! Technically, by some accounts and by some, I mean all this could be considered quoteunquote: illegal.”

“Have you considered therapy instead? I could refer you to a great psychiatrist.”

“You know, I sorta consider stabbing a third date sort of deal?”

"Honestly I'm starting to get genuinely concerned about your hearing. I said I'm. Not. Telling. You. Anything. Do I need to talk louder? Maybe write it out for you? Ow! Jeez, you can cut me all you want, but that's not going to be nearly as effective as just talking to an otolaryngologist."

“Did you miss me?” “Well I did at first, but then I started getting fond of the slow drip of blood and the echoes of screams - sooooo I’m good, now. You can go, but thanks for asking.”

“I’m sorry, I don’t think I heard you the first 478 times. What was it you wanted again? Hm. Nope. Still not clicking. You better ask again.”

“Ah, you know me - I just love getting tortured. But the mice? They don’t like to watch. So we should probably skip it for today.”

“If you’re going to burn me, can you at least put the blindfold back on? Seeing your dumb face is torture enough, I don’t need to do both at once.”

“Have you ever tried dating apps?”

“Canned soup again? Did your mother never teach you to cook?”

“I’m not sure what exactly you want when you ask me to beg. Maybe you could do a demonstration? Knees, please.”

“I know you’re having fun, but it’s not healthy to put this much attention into just one hobby. You could try….card-making or….pottery?

“You know, I’m not really feeling it today. Soooo….rain check? Thursday, maybe? I’m free after lunch until two.”

“Oooo. Stalker. So scary. Wait-where are you going with that knife?”

“You know, I’m actually supposed to be at band practice right now? I’m just gonna- Ah. Okay. Nope. No no, I can stay. Nice knife by the way. Did your mom get that for you?”

“Oof - the knife’s a bit cold. Maybe you should heat it up in the microwave real quick.”

“When was the last time you took a shower? Because you reek of ‘daddy never loved me enough’.”

“What’s your favorite color? Oh wait no - let me guess. Red?”

“Put your finger under my chin one more fucking time and I’m biting it off.”

“Look at me.” “Uughh, do I have to?”

“When I walk into a room, you stand up.” “When you walk into a room, I groan.”

“Eh. I’ve seen better.”

“Less talk, more go away.”

“If you want me, you get the sass too. Sorry, we’re a package deal.”

“Iiiiiiiiiff you’re happy and you know it, put the knife downnn.” *clap clap*

Actions

Ripping their face away when Whumper grabs their jaw.

Death glares when they’re gagged.

Struggling in their restraints - not to try to get out, but to show Whumper that they’re really fucking pissed.

Refusing to speak. Staring at the wall and ignoring Whumper’s comments and questions.

Biting / kicking / hitting Whumper at every possible opportunity, regardless of how much trouble they get in.

Spitting in Whumper’s face instead of answering a question.

Snarling in response when Whumper grab them by the jaw.

Sticking their leg out to trip Whumper as they walk by.

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A few of these I stole from my Sassy Kidnappee Prompt List because they fit really well, sorry 😅

(tags: @prisonerwhump @whumpawink @mabledonut @jadeocean46910 @paleassprince @distinctlywhumpthing @tropes-for-my-md-daydreams @batfacedliar-yetagain @suspicious-whumping-egg @wormwriting @meowsikbox @villainsvictim @throwawaywhumper @wild-selenite-caffine @whumpasaurus101 @thecitythatdoesntsleep @whumpworld @cryptidhongo @rose-pinkie @whumpberry-cookie)

whumper using victim blaming dialogue as a humiliation tactic—

“well I wouldn’t have done it if you didn’t make it so fucking easy.”

“if you weren’t so pretty when you begged and cried.”

“if you didn’t take abuse so well.”

“I just hit you and you whine like that— I mean, what am I supposed to think?”

“you know you deserve this.”

“go on, tell me you deserve it.”

“I want to hear you say it.”

and who knows— eventually, whumpee might start to believe they’re right

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[shoutout to @unorganisedalienrubbish for coming up with like half of these]

ANOTHER ROUND OF NSFW PROMPTS PLEASE AND THANKS!!!🗣️🗯️📣🔞

30 Nsfwhump Dialogue Prompts

(TW: explicit noncon implied through dialogue, dirty talk, noncon dialogue, implied abuse, implied gagging, implied torture, implied forced threesome/multiples, blood, violence, manipulation, gaslighting)

"Your attitude is going to decide whether or not I lube you up or not."

"Stop fighting, it's going in either way."

"Kiss me like you mean it Whumpee, or this will last longer if you turn me off."

"Please, you can do whatever you want to me just please be gentle.."

"What makes you think you've earned my kindness? You're a living cock sleeve and that's all you'll ever be."

"Look at you, what a fucking mess. I didn't give you permission to cum but you're too untrained to control yourself."

"There you go, hold my cock in your throat... Longer, you'll never get to thirty seconds at this rate if you keep choking."

"I know you're stuffed too full but if you're good, I'll pull one of the balls out. But you have to earn it, first."

"Oh you can take two cocks at once... Might bleed a little bit but we don't mind some extra room."

"Are you playing shy? Just pretend it's me underneath you and show them how you really ride."

"Spread yourself open for me, show me what's mine, and prove you're going to submit to me. I might just take it easy on you if you do."

"If that mouth doesn't have a cock in it, it's making too much noise."

"Still tight after all I've put your hole through, you should be proud of that slutty body of yours."

"Bend over and take your punishment or I'll give you pain instead."

"Would you rather have the whip against your back or the handle inside you? Your choice."

"You don't have the right to say 'no' to me, I own your fucking body and all your holes, am I understood?"

"Since you won't act right for me, maybe someone else can break you in. I already told him not to hold back, so you'd better get ready."

"Either you sit on my cock or I'll make sure you can't sit at all."

"Come on, give me a kiss and use your tongue this time, I can tell when you're too scared."

"You can get in the mood or not, I don't care Whumpee, I'll fuck your throat regardless."

"Do those fingers feel nice? You went from crying to moaning pretty fast, Whumpee.. Be honest."

"Once they're all done cumming inside you, this pretty little plug is going to keep you full until you've learned your lesson."

"Have you learned your lesson? Or should I crank it higher and leave you alone with your toys for another hour?"

"You said you hated me so I thought I'd let someone else have you, see if you like them better."

"I haven't even moved and you're already crying about it hurting? Ngh.. You're gonna love when I start pounding you into the mattress."

"Suck my cock if you want a meal tonight and this time make it convincing."

"Let me see that pretty crying face, makes me cum every time."

"Oh pretty baby, you can take it a little deeper, don't close your legs."

"That's it, just a little faster and I'll cum- You can take it, shh, just keep clenching down on me.."

"I know it hurts.. but don't you want to make me feel good? Don't you want to be a good pet?"

nsfw prompts? pretty please?

(Tags/TW: noncon, implied noncon, explicit language, nsft, vampire whump, nsfwhump, biting, bondage, threatening, vampire whumpee, vampire whumper, physical abuse.)

Some of these are extremely heavy, viewer discretion is advised.

"I suggest you open your legs... because if I open them, they might never close again."

"I don't care how dizzy you are, bend over and ask me for it."

"Shall I be a good Master and let you cum from my bite?"

"Stay still, you can't fight me off, not while I'm inside you."

"If you want blood, you'd better get on your hands and knees and offer to fuck it out of me."

"Do you smell that? You're bleeding. Heh.. guess I was too big to shove in all at once, even for a bloodsucker."

"I'll make it feel good if you're obedient and don't fight me this time. If you do, I'll break all of your limbs and fuck you like a ragdoll."

"T-That hurts! I can't take a-all of it!! *hic* Please don't push it in any further..! I'll let you d-drink from me-e!"

"Aww.. Poor thing, did you think I was going to show you mercy after you went into frenzy on me? I'll teach you what your mouth is for."

"If you piss me off, you're not going to survive this fuck, little human slut."

"Please Master... I've never been taken before, I'm begging for your mercy.."

"If pet make Master feel really good.. could pet please drink..?"

Could you possibly uhm... write some more vampire dialogue prompts? 👉👈 Very inspiring!

(Tags/TW: blood, enslavement, dehumanization, starvation, wounds, abuse, human pet universe, gaslighting, mental reconditioning, blood addiction, vampire whump, breaking bones, begging, mental reprogramming, burning, blood drinking, imbalanced power dynamics, threatening, implied/referenced violence, Vampire!Whumpee, Vampire!Whumper, Vampire!Caretaker.)

Vampire Whumper

"I love it when you squirm, knowing you'll never break free."

"Maybe if you didn't fight me, it wouldn't be broken."

"Scream one more time and I'll sever your vocal chords."

"You've stopped flinching when I bite you... Must not compare to your punishments."

"Make yourself bleed for me and I'll go easy on you."

"I wonder what it would be like to bite a chunk out of you. I bet it wouldn't heal pretty at all."

"Drink it pig, drink my blood and get your filthy fix."

"You're such an addict for Master's blood... You'll offer me anything for it, wont you?

Whumpee

"P-Please, I can't lose any more blood.."

"N-No! You can break anything y-you want but please don't cut if off.."

"I-I can't heal fast enough for Master without feeding... Please Master please.."

"It hurts too bad- I can't take it! *sobs* P-Please put the fire out..!!"

"I-I was good Master, I didn't let any of your blood go to waste."

"Please punish me Master, however you see fit. Your pet leech needs to feed so badly.. Master can make them earn it, please punish pet for Master's blood."

"Does Master want to take it out on pet? If Master is angry, they should punish pet and make them useful. Pet was just fed so pet will heal."

"P-Please not the stake... It hurts so bad when it goes in..!"

Caretaker

"Here, please drink this, you'll feel better."

"Shh, I've got you, no one will ever be able to take you away from me."

"I know it wont taste as good... but you can feed from me, I don't mind."

"Is it okay if I touch you? I can heal you that way."

"It sounds gross but I promise, if you drink my blood you'll feel better."

"I'll watch over you while you sleep. Don't worry about me, I don't need to rest but you certainly do."

"I don't drink from humans, so you're safe with me."

"Why are you scared Whumpee?" "How did I know? I can smell it on you, so please tell me what's wrong."

"What can I do to make you less afraid of me sweetheart..?"

"I know Whumper was a vampire like me... But I promise, I'm nothing like them."

"I have to be careful with Whumpee, I don't want to hurt them. They're too precious."

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These are super fun to do so if anyone would like to see more, please request it! <3 Or I might just post a couple more pages on my own. vuv

MORE 👏 PROMPTS 👏 theme: begging 💕

(Tags/TW: implied abuse, implied noncon, implied torture, whipping, slavery, dehumanization, verbal abuse, implied punishment, fear programming, begging, forced to beg, insulting, manipulation, cursing, possible nsft/w, dialogue prompts, whump prompts)

"P-Please! You promised if I took the punishment I-I could feed!"

"W-What if I break it myself? See..? Please don't cut it off!"

"Can pet have the whip this time instead of the cane? I've been good Master, please!"

"I already told you how much I fucking hate begging, now I'm going to seal that mouth shut."

"I'm sorry, did I just hear a pet begging? It seems like you haven't learned a thing from your last punishment."

"Filthy little blood-suckers don't get to ask for things. I thought I made myself clear."

"Please Master? I'll do anything, you can do whatever you want to me! I just need it so badly, please let me drink.."

"Turn around, stick your ass out and beg for it."

"You know I can't hear you unless you're begging, pet."

"Wipe those ugly tears off your face and beg me to hit you again."

"One more pathetic plea out of you and I'll take out your vocal chords."

"If you want to feel one ounce of pleasure, you're going to beg me to fuck you, right now."

"I'll cut out your fucking tongue if you don't stop begging. I'm not letting you go."

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Not all of them ended up vampire prompts but I went with it! Anything is a vampire prompt if you make them vampires. <3

Could you do some more NSFW prompts please? 👀🔞

Oh lawd, here we go again. Thank you for the ask!

(Tags/TW: noncon, intimate whumper, heavily implied abuse, 18+ dialogue, nsfwhump, threatening, implied force, gagging, begging, conditioning, reprogramming, injury, mind-breaking (ish), profanity and vulgar slang for body parts.)

"You’d better shut your fucking mouth if you wanna walk in the next few days."

"P-Please- Too d-deep! I-It hurts!” “Oh but you’re taking it so well, Whumpee.” 

“I-It feels good W-Whumper..” “I told you it would, kitten, I’ll make you feel even better soon.” 

“P-Please W-Whumper! I was s-so close..! P-Please just let me c-cum!” “It’s only been three hours... You haven’t been punished enough yet.” 

“Ask me nicely, pet. And I might give you want you want.” “C-Can Pet make Master f-feel good..? Pet wants to feel good too.” 

“Pretty hard to say ‘no’ like this, huh? Eyes rolled back, mindlessly grinding your hips for more.” 

“Since it’s your first time, I’ll be gentle. The moment you start fighting me, I’ll fuck you how I please.” 

“Only half-way and you’re already gagging, you’ll never talk me out of your punishment at this rate.” 

“Every time I whip you, you get a little tighter around me, does it turn you on that much?” 

“You don’t even know what you’re begging for anymore, do you? Should I thrust a little faster to help you choose?” 

“Open your mouth and kneel, Whumpee. I’m about to use you for what you were really made for.” 

“Just the sound of my belt buckle and you’re hard.. You’re a perfect slut for me now, aren’t you?” 

“You can either swallow your pride and spread your legs for me or I’ll fill you so full of cum you’ll taste me.” 

“Hmm... Which hole should I use tonight, Whumpee? You already know what my favorite is, so choose.” 

“M-Master I’ve been good, c-can I c-cum tonight?” 

“Repeat after me: My body is for Master’s pleasure. I do not deserve pleasure unless Master gives it to me.” 

“Will you keep your legs open this time? Or should I get the spreader bar?” 

“If I take the gag off, you’re getting something else in your mouth, pet.” 

“Master’s friend here is going to teach Whumpee the difference between how I touch you and how you deserve to be treated. Maybe you’ll be grateful when they split you in two.” 

“Are you crying? When you’re already covered in your own cum? Something is amiss, Whumpee. You must not be as afraid as you lead on.” 

“Pretty tight for someone else’s toy. They must not fuck you properly but- ngh.. I-I’ll change that, I’ll pound you stupid every night and break that little ass of yours.” 

“See? Your body found a way to lube up after all, Whumpee. But you’d better start riding, blood dries out pretty fast with friction.” 

SLIMY ONE-LINERS FOR THE SEXY SCUMBAG

These are just some lines I compiled that I think would be hella sexy and helpful for those who love writing for that oh-so lovable bastard you’re thinking about. Use them however you wish, but with great power comes great responsibility~ I’ll probably add as I go.

tw: dark-fic implications, smutty stuff.

- “Oo, you wanna kiss me so bad,” VS “And so what if I do?”

- “Such a lewd mouth on such a sweet face.”

- “Eyes on me.”

- “I’ll have so much fun breaking you.”

- “Are you trying to make me jealous?”

- “You’re playing a dangerous game here.”

- “You did this to me, so take responsibility.”

- “Why don’t you use that mouth for something more useful?”

- “You say no, but your body is screaming yes.”

- “Beg me for mercy then.”

- “You like that, huh? “ vs “Yeah I know y’do.”

- “Wet pussy never lies.”

- “You’re no angel. Don’t lie to yourself.”

- “This is mine, you understand?”

- “My room. Now.”

- “Well? It ain’t gonna suck itself.”

- “Less talking, more fucking/sucking.”

- “Fuck yeah… where’d you learn that from?”

- “Such a filthy mouth on you!”

- “Atta-girl!” / “Atta-boy!”

- “What’s that? Can’t hear you over your pathetic babbling!”

- “Shut up and kiss me.”

- “Brats cry the loudest.”

- “Ah yes… this collar suits you much more than a wedding ring.”

- “Ass. Up.”

- “Y’wanna be my dirty little secret?”

- “I don’t mind helping you get him off your mind… if y’get me off.”

- “You’ll forget all about him when I’m pounding my way into your heart.”

- “Don’t make me laugh, that fucker wouldn’t piss on you if you were on fire.”

- “You still want some shrimp dicked fuckboy, or do you want a real man?”

- “I can do right by you — so right.”

- “Admit it, you’re head over heels for me. And I’m obsessed with you too.”

- “I don’t care if anyone’s looking, they can watch! You’re mine!”

- “Play with fire, and you’ll get burned.”

- “Aw,” “D’awh,” “Hmm?” and “Oh?” Condescendingly.

- “Take it, bitch!”

- “Needy slut.”

- “You fuck like a whore!”

- “Sing more for me, baby” but it’s just moaning.

- “I’ll take my time with you.”

- “Y’love me? Prove. It.”

- “Show me how sorry you are.”

- “I’m mean to keep you keen.”

- “Don’t play coy with me.”

- “Playing hard to get? I love it.”

- “Nice dress — it’d look better on the floor.”

- “You dress like that and expect me not to want you?”

- “I’m going to ruin you for everyone else.”

- “If you keep touching me like that, I’m not responsible for what happens next.”

- “I’ll fuck the pain away.”

- “Everyone in this room wants to be me right now.”

- “The next person to eye-fuck you is gonna regret it.”

- “Show ‘em how much you love your daddy.”

- “Who owns this pussy?” While giving it a harsh slap.

- “Have you no shame?~”

- “If y’keep undressing me like that, I’ll catch a cold.”

- “Open your mouth,” before spitting into it.

- “Scream louder.”

- “Keep talkin’, I’ll spank you right here and now.”

- “If you hate it so much, then why are you moaning so loud?”

- “Watch how I pleasure myself… then you’ll get a turn.”

- “Stop covering up my hard work,” when seeing bruises, bite marks, handprints.

- “Long hair is easier to pull, doll.”

- “You’re practically begging me to fuck you.”

- “Saddle up then, baby.” / “Giddy up.”

- “Ride me like you love me.”

- “Bite down on this, noisy thing.”

- “Think I didn’t catch you starin’?”

- “I’ll make you a star, baby. Let’s make a movie.”

- “Smile for the camera, slut.”

- “Take your clothes off… but the heels stay on.”

- “You like my attention, don’t you?”

- “Quit talkin’ about your boyfriend. He isn’t the one making you feel good right now.”

- “Turn around and walk out that door while you have the chance, because you aren’t gettin’ away from me.”

- “Shh, shh… just a little more, you can take it.”

- “Crybabies like you are just the cutest. I can’t help myself.”

- “Fuck me now or lose me forever.”

- “Controlling?! I’ll show you controlling!”

- “Behave, pet.”

- “Forget the damn dress, I’ll buy you another.”

- “Got a lotta feelings for you… but I’m not telling you which ones.”

- “Oh don’t look so hurt. You knew I was no good for you, baby.”

- “No seats? Bummer…. My lap is feelin’ empty though.”

- “You’re a smart girl, don’t make me spell how how bad I’ve been wanting you.”

Bonus: “hey there sugar tits”

NSFWhump dialogue prompts

⚠️ TW: explicit NSFW… SORRY MOM LOL

“Don’t just lie there all limp, act like you wanna please me. If I wanted to fuck a corpse I would just kill you.”

“You’re a little whore just like your [person] was.”

“I’ll tell everyone what a slut you are, remember I have pictures. And what would your poor mother and father say?”

“Get the hell up. You still got three clients left out there who paid good money to fuck you, so you better show them a good time.”

“Strip. Now. Or do you want me to do it for you?”

“Take your clothes off, baby. That’s it, nice and slow for me.”

“Come on, dance for us, give us a show!”

“Don’t try and cover yourself up, I’ve already seen every part of you.”

“Here’s what we’re gonna do; I’m gonna hurt you, and your gonna pretend to like it.”

“Im not a sadist but seeing you in pain is really turning me on.”

“Crawl. On your hands and knees. Ass up. Stick your tongue out like a good little puppy. That’s it, just like that.”

“You screaming like that makes me so hard.”

“It’s not assault if you like it, I mean look at you. Your so hard/wet.”

“I could sell you to some really nasty people, you’d never be seen again. They would do worse to you than I’ve done.”

“Make yourself useful and come suck my cock.”

“All that I’ve done for you and you can’t even do this one thing for me? I think you owe me.”

“Dumb little whores like you don’t get to wear any clothes.”

“Is that blood? Oh, don’t tell me your a virgin!”

“You should be thanking me, no one else would wanna fuck an ugly little thing like you.”

“Come on, baby. I want you nose deep in this pussy.”

“Lick Clean up this mess.”

“Did I give you permission to cum?”

“I don’t wanna feel any teeth or else I’m gonna knock ‘em out.”

“I wanna hear some pretty moaning and slurping sounds outta you.”

“You put on a good show tonight and maybe I’ll reward you.”

“You want me to take you home, pretty thing?”

(Whumpee)

“Don’t do this to me… please, I’ve never done this before…”

“Come on, y-you don’t want me, I’m not very attractive or anything.”

“Please don’t hurt me!”/ “Oh I won’t hurt you, baby, I’ll be real gentle.”

“I don’t belong to you! I have a master and they’re gonna be really mad if you touch me!”

“You said you wouldn’t do this, you said you would never force me-“/ “I said I wouldn’t force you if you didn’t want it, but clearly you do.”

“Please, just not inside me…”

“I’ll- I’ll do what ever you want- just not here, not in front of everyone.”

Writing Tips

Punctuating Dialogue

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➸ “This is a sentence.”

➸ “This is a sentence with a dialogue tag at the end,” she said.

➸ “This,” he said, “is a sentence split by a dialogue tag.”

➸ “This is a sentence,” she said. “This is a new sentence. New sentences are capitalized.”

➸ “This is a sentence followed by an action.” He stood. “They are separate sentences because he did not speak by standing.”

➸ She said, “Use a comma to introduce dialogue. The quote is capitalized when the dialogue tag is at the beginning.”

➸ “Use a comma when a dialogue tag follows a quote,” he said.

“Unless there is a question mark?” she asked.

“Or an exclamation point!” he answered. “The dialogue tag still remains uncapitalized because it’s not truly the end of the sentence.”

➸ “Periods and commas should be inside closing quotations.”

➸ “Hey!” she shouted, “Sometimes exclamation points are inside quotations.”

However, if it’s not dialogue exclamation points can ask be “outside”!

➸ “Does this apply to question marks too?” he asked.

If it’s not dialogue, can question marks be “outside”? (Yes, they can.)

➸ “This applies to dashes too. Inside quotations, dashes typically express—“

“Interruption” — but there are situations dashes may be outside.

➸ “You’ll notice that exclamation marks, question marks, and dashes do not have a comma after them. Ellipses don’t have a comma after them either…” she said.

➸ “My teacher said, ‘Use single quotation marks when quoting within dialogue.’”

➸ “Use paragraph breaks to indicate a new speaker,” he said.

“The readers will know it’s someone else speaking.”

Writing prompt

“Bring me there” you point at the end of the galactic map, on a planet where your friend is getting held as a hostage. The yellow-pink man stares at you in disbelief. “You want me to bring you to the most dangerous planet in the galaxy?” You nod. “I’m a taxi driver, not a one-way ticket to hell.” he scoffs.

A Plea for Peace: End the Romanticization of Victimhood

Give Israelis and Palestinians a Chance for Coexistence

Content Warning: Mentions of violence and historical atrocities

For too long, people from the outside have romanticized the Israeli-Palestinian conflict as a gladiatorial arena, a reality show, or a competition of values. By romanticizing victimhood and choosing sides, you allow governments and dictators to stay in power. Your inconsistent support, favoring one side's victimhood over the other, makes it impossible for those of us, both Jews and Arabs, who want to live in peace to actually achieve that goal.

The West and East have chosen politicians on both sides who oppress the weak, buy warfare from them, and lack empathy. Yet for centuries, Jews and Arabs lived together peacefully in many areas, and there are still those among us who have never stopped hoping for that reality, even in the face of atrocities like the Nakba, Sabra and Shatila and many other horrendous crimes to the one side and bus bombings, rape crimes, and the horrific events of October 7th, where Jewish Arab supporters were slaughtered and burned alive on the other. Brainwashed-hurting-people are hurting people. By dehumanizing each side for its barbaric acts you leave them lonely and hurting, which leads to more extremism.

We are all being brainwashed, and as time goes on, more Jews and Arabs are losing hope, allowing pain and hatred to consume us, and enabling the rise of fanatic politicians who further fuel this cycle. But we are all just people who want to live. If the East and West truly wanted us to find a solution, they would invest in mutual education and acknowledgment of each nation's pain, helping us learn about our shared Semitic Abrahamic roots, rather than selling both of us more weapons.

Many Arabs in Israel-Palestine are not just our cousins, but our sisters and brothers. Not all Jews fled when the Romans came; some of them became Christian and then Muslim. Some of them are the Palestinians of today! And the other part is our closest cousins. Our DNA is so similar; there are no closer ethnicities in the world. The world plays savior while pushing us to fight harder, funding narratives of hate and promoting xenophobia and antisemitism on both sides.

We are all children of the same God, the last remaining Semitic peoples. Please, world, support new leadership on both sides! Invest in peace, not war. Give the Jews and Arabs who want peace a chance to achieve it. Strengthen us, and give the next generations of Semites a chance to live with dignity, compassion, respect, and mutual love.

Since the British Mandate pitted us against each other, as they did in India and Pakistan and so many other places, where colonial empires left the people to fight each other - "proving" the "barbarity of the locals" in comparison to the supremacy of the colonials, the biggest world powers have used our conflict to prove their own strength, choosing a side as if we were gladiators in a ring. Please, stop this game of money, power, and manipulation. No one should have to die anymore. Life is already too short! Palestinians and Israelis should be free together, from this war, from these separative beliefs, from the hatred, to live and move freely, to marry each other freely. To have one shared government that represents us all equally with dignity - with no more brainwashing and separation. This is what I pray for. No occupation nor any slaughter or rape of any kind. We should not fall into traps; if all people open their eyes, politicians lose their power. With the help of decent, honest allies from the world, this is achievable, slowly but surely. This should be the reality. Where all kids know both languages in an Arab-Jewish state, celebrating together, growing and then aging together with the deepest respect for all the mutual and all the unique, beautiful differences. Looking into Arabs' eyes, I see the eyes of my family members. You are not that different. I want peace with you .

I have heard few voices in the community against ai generated art, this is my personal perspective on the topic. But I also invite you to a dialogue - everyone who hates/loves/neutral to ai art in general and particularly on tumblr... Please explain your point of view, I want to understand you better😉

Carmen part 3 -

Benefits of ai for an artist in hardest days of disability - I can keep fulfilling my imagination even in days of very low ability to move. Of course when I paint I express something more authentic, but with time I compose prompts that give results that are very close to my imagination - which deeply satisfy and comfort me.